Hello everyone!
This is my third post about the novel "Thirteen Reasons Why".
Today i write about Tyler's behavior in Cassette 2B. The main scene is about Tyler, who is taking photos from Hannah, while she is changing her clothes in her room.
Wheter i could talk to Tyler, i had so many questions. His behavior was just horrible. For me he is just a dull boy. I would like to say Tyler that it was a big mistake to spied Hannah. I would ask him why i was his target. Hannah was such a nice girl, who does nothing bad to anyone. So why Tyler, why? When i would live today, I would say to him that he must delete the pictures and say sorry to me, if he did not do that, I would be very angry and would report him by the police, because it's forbidden to take photos from persons, which dont want that.
But now it's too late Tyler. Now i am dead and you were one reason why...
See you :)
Hey Henry!
AntwortenLöschenNice blog entry. I like it to read it. But I don't unterstand it..
At the begin you spoke about Hannah and Tyler and than you spoke in the first perspective in Hannahs view. Maybe you could change the beginning to than it is fine. :-)
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AntwortenLöschenDear Henry,
AntwortenLöschenI agree with Lisa. The style of your text is very nice, but you changed the person in the course of your text, didn't you?!
All in all a good blog post!
Dear Henry,
AntwortenLöschenI agree with Lisa. The style of your text is very nice, but you changed the person in the course of your text, didn't you?!
All in all a good blog post!
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AntwortenLöschenI find this entry very good. But like the two before me have said, the choice of perspective is a bit confusing.
AntwortenLöschenNevertheless, good work:)
> Today I (capitalize the first person pronoun!) write about Tyler's behavior AS DESCRIBED ON Cassette 2B.
AntwortenLöschen> whether / if/when
> big mistake to spy (infinitive!) ON Hannah.
> stick to the tense that you have chosen!
> If I was still alive (LOGIC - DOES NOT MAKE MUCH SENSE!), I would say to him that he HAS TO delete the pictures and say sorry to me, if he did not do that, I would be very angry and would report him TO the police, because it's forbidden to take photos from persons WHO (relative pronouns!!)